Blog #3: Roughhousing (Dodoitsu)

Posted by JettaRaine Capellan (she/her) on

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Memories in that big house,

Wooden walls painted with crimson

From bloodied, shredded scuffle

Evil brotherhood.

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JettaRaine Capellan (she/her)

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  1. Asim Andre
    I'm really curious about what "Evil Brotherhood" means or is it meant to be open to interpretation? Besides that, I really enjoy the contrast between the wooden walls and the crimson color that you mention. I feel like the alliteration and rural feeling( might not be best word) of the former work well against the more violent imagery of the fight that seems to break out.

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