Blog #2: Dancing In The Rain

       I only have one memory of my childhood. A memory that would not make sense without a little bit of background information. I grew up in the Dominican Republic in an area where the living conditions were hard and the surroundings were dangerous not because of robberies or anything like that but more because it was in the middle of the forest and you only had your neighbor to help you survive. It was about a 15-minute walk up and down hills to the bus stop and an hour-and-a-half bus ride to the city. It was by definition the middle of nowhere. It rained all the time and we were surrounded by forest on one side and sand on the other. 

       Growing up there was the highlight of my life. When I was about 5 or 6, my grandmother and I were home alone like most days and it was raining. I still remember the sound of the rain hitting the metal roof of our house and the rhythmic sound of the water falling sounding almost like a small waterfall. The smell of the wet grown and the lemon tree out back. It was like paradise to me. My grandmother and I were sitting by the door in our backyard which looked out into the forest. We sat eating mangoes and singing songs to the rain. I could swear that I saw the trees dancing to our song. I wanted to dance with the trees and I told my mother, she got up and started dancing in the rain. She screamed at me to never be afraid to dance with the trees in the rain. She told me that the trees were my friends because I belong to them as much as they belong to me. I danced with her that day in the rain. I sang to the rain and asked her to turn the water into blessings. I danced with the trees and made them my friends. To this day I do not use an umbrella when it rains. I just let the rain wash over me, just like it did that day.

Comments ( 0 )

  1. Rebecca Vega
    This was so beautifully written! I enjoyed each word of it. That connection with nature was really demonstrated in your story and that love for rain. Although it was maturely told and had so much detail of the memory it still felt like a story that was seen through a child's eyes. The innocence and creativity of the trees dancing was my favorite part. And I loved how you brought it back to the present day.
  2. Brandon Marcia
    I enjoyed the context in the beginning where you set the location up to sound like the middle of nowhere with the city being far away. Only to then share that it wasn't an isolated place where nothing happened but a place of wholesome memories. When you wrote about eating mangoes with your grandmother and singing songs as you both overlooked the forest, it was like visualizing a pretty painting, well done with the sensory detail.
  3. Jarian Mercado Santos
    This memory is very heartwarming. Its moments like these that truly hold a place in our hearts. It's never about what costs the most money or about having luxurious material possessions. It would've been very easy to feel gloomy about the fact that it rains a little too often but to learn to dance in the rain anyway is too find the beauty in the small things about life.
  4. Gisselle Ramirez
    I think that this was a really beautifully written piece. I think you did an amazing job of describing the setting, the rain, and the trees, it made me feel like I was there. I just absolutely loved the emotion that this piece conveyed and I really liked how you wrapped it up with something about the present. Overall really good job!

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